In Laws and Play Cousins: A Gripping Tale of Family Drama, Ambition, and Crime - Perfect for Book Clubs and Crime Fiction Fans" （如果原始标题是中文，优化后的英文标题为：） "In Laws and Play Cousins: A Thrilling Story of Family Struggles, Ambition, and Murder - Ideal for Book Lovers and Crime Fiction Enthusiasts

EXTREME WARNING: Unless your computer has updated Norton Anti-virus protection or comparable protection against covert & malicious software (which infects your computer & then downloads all your files at night by spies) DO NOT ACCESS ANY OF MY REVIEWS!!! [This is no hype or joke.]First, let me say that I was/am extremely impressed by this thriller of a novel, and am very glad that I sampled it...because I purchased it immediately. This novel has a totally interesting and page-turner story-line...with a fiercely intelligent heroine. And it is too well-crafted to let the minor editorial mis-steps it has keep it from achieving the economic and literary successes it deserves. Here are my suggestions to the author. I hope they help:First, it needs a new title as the current one seems audibly juvenile, and is decidedly unappealing. Secondly, it needs minor grammatical and story editing for clarity. (Because it is an e-book, this can probably be done almost immediatedly.) And finally, it needs deletions of its excessive blank pages. (The self-editing done by first-time authors is usually good, but even best-selling authors need first-reviews, editorial suggestions, and proof-readers--which is why what they write seems so smooth and polished when published.)To Ms Gant, the author, I recommend this: If you read customer reviews such as this (and you do nothing else), please re-title your book. You are too talented to let this excellent novel die or be overlooked due to minor flaws which are correctible through good editing. More than anything else, I suggest a more snappy and appropriate title, something like INLAWS, OUTLAWS, AND DAMN-GOOD PLAYERS or something else that is appealing at first glance to your intended audience. Second, your cover's first artwork when I read your novel (not the current one shown) was horrible. It seemed taken from some self-publishing bargain bin and was a complete turn-off. You can do (and have subsequently done) much, much better than this, and your novel deserves it.I am very impressed with your enormous talent, and have recommended this novel to friends and family (despite the mis-steps,) and am looking forward to not only your next novel, but also to your future success. Thank you, for an excellent read.A fan and a reader.